Post by Kim on Feb 27, 2006 21:04:44 GMT -5
Tybalt
Name: Tybalt
Breed: Pure Arabian
Gender: Stallion
Height: 16HH
Color: Gray
Age: 4
Sire: Original
Dan: Original
[glow=red,2,300]Awards & Banners[/glow]
Evaluations
Tybalt
Name: 8/10
Heritage: 0/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 9/10
Personality: 0/10
Total: 25/50 (50%)
Notes: Tybalt is a beautiful Stallion with great pictures, he has a good show record but no referance to his sire and dam, he also doesnt have a personality
Kyla
Tybalt
Name: 10/10
Heritage: 0/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 12/10
Overall: 7/10
Total: 37/50, 74%, C
Comments: He needs a heritage. Even if it just says Original, he needs one. Especially if you plan to breed him, so people can trace his foals lines.
Otto
Tybalt
Name: 10/10 - A year ago, I would have no idea what the name meant. Now, thanks to 9th grade english and good ’ole Shakespeare [/sarcasm], I be luvin the name!
Color/Conformation: 10/10
Persona Reality: NA - a persona would REALLY help
Pics: 8/10 - Its a nice pic, but when I look at it, the first thing I see is the faded man, which is kind of odd when looking for pics of a horse
Heritage: NA
Offspring: NA
Show Record: 9/10 - As before said by someone else, always room for improvement!
Rarity of Breed: NA - this is for non-arabs and non-tb’s
Page Organization: 9/10 - I cant find anything really wrong or off about it, but something just bothers me...
46/50, 92%, A-
~Otto
Name: Tybalt
Breed: Pure Arabian
Gender: Stallion
Height: 16HH
Color: Gray
Age: 4
Sire: Original
Dan: Original
[glow=red,2,300]Awards & Banners[/glow]
Evaluations
Tybalt
Name: 8/10
Heritage: 0/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 9/10
Personality: 0/10
Total: 25/50 (50%)
Notes: Tybalt is a beautiful Stallion with great pictures, he has a good show record but no referance to his sire and dam, he also doesnt have a personality
Kyla
Tybalt
Name: 10/10
Heritage: 0/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 12/10
Overall: 7/10
Total: 37/50, 74%, C
Comments: He needs a heritage. Even if it just says Original, he needs one. Especially if you plan to breed him, so people can trace his foals lines.
Otto
Tybalt
Name: 10/10 - A year ago, I would have no idea what the name meant. Now, thanks to 9th grade english and good ’ole Shakespeare [/sarcasm], I be luvin the name!
Color/Conformation: 10/10
Persona Reality: NA - a persona would REALLY help
Pics: 8/10 - Its a nice pic, but when I look at it, the first thing I see is the faded man, which is kind of odd when looking for pics of a horse
Heritage: NA
Offspring: NA
Show Record: 9/10 - As before said by someone else, always room for improvement!
Rarity of Breed: NA - this is for non-arabs and non-tb’s
Page Organization: 9/10 - I cant find anything really wrong or off about it, but something just bothers me...
46/50, 92%, A-
~Otto